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Brightwing

Author: Sullivan Lee
Publisher: Self-published
Published: July 6 2011
289 pages (eBook)

I received this book from the author in exchange for a review. The author you may know under her real name Laura Sullivan, author of some published middle-grade and YA novels. She decided to go under a different name and self-publish for her first adult novel. I had no idea what to expect from the book. I don’t normally read books dealing with crime and whatnot, but I was pleasantly surprised by Brightwing, and would definitely read more works from this author.

The book centers around three characters, all of whom are criminals. Two of them are brothers, Edgar and Mallory Battle, who are pretty much America’s Most Wanted. The two are wanted for a string of robberies and murders (though in Edgar’s defense, Mallory did most if not all of the killing, due to him being somewhat mentally unbalanced). In order to shake the police off their trail, they decide to take a hostage in case they run into the police. When the brothers spot Lucy Brightwing off the side of the highway, trying to fix her car, they carjack her and force her to become their hostage.

Little do they know, Lucy is also a criminal and has millions and millions of dollars’ worth of uncut gems secretly stashed in her car, fresh from her own act of grand larceny. Slowly, Lucy outsmarts her captors and forces them to become putty in her own hands. But she did not expect that she will fall in love with Edgar Battle …

I really enjoyed the beginning of the story and the end of the story. The beginning and the end were jam packed with thrills and suspense. Despite the action, the book also focuses a lot on the characters’ and their backstories, and spends a lot of time building the relationship between Lucy and the brothers. Lucy in particular, is a very interesting character and not one that I’ve encountered much (if ever) in novels. I loved reading about her outsmarting the Battle brothers and similarly, it was fun reading about Edgar’s slow realization that the hostage they picked up is a lot more crime-savvy than him and Mallory.

Lucy is a really kick-ass character, and driven by the motivation to acquire lands for her Tequesta nation. Lucy is the last of the Tequesta Indians/Native Americans tribe, and the whole point of her performing her heist is to get enough money to pay for the sovereign land (and for the bribes she’d need to do to get what she wants). That’s something that’s really unique to me. I actually don’t know that much about Native American lands/reservations and things like that, so it was really great reading about new things like this. I really liked Lucy because even though she starts loving Edgar, she never forgets her dreams and herself. I can’t remember the exact scene, but there was one where someone asked if she was willing to give herself up to save Edgar, and she pretty much rolls her eyes, saying she wouldn’t be silly enough to do something like that. Haha, it was great — love is amazing, but I find myself respecting her because of it. She did only know him for a week, after all.

The part of the book I wasn’t too crazy about was the middle portion, when Lucy and the brothers hide out in the swamp. The story slows down a lot during the middle, with more focus given on Lucy and Edgar’s relationship. There was also a lot of description in the middle, such as when Edgar sees Lucy’s house for the first time and every little thing is described, from the wood of the floor to the wood of the walls and beyond. It felt a bit much. There was also some scenes dealing with some of Lucy’s ‘friends’ from her reservation (I believe) that were not as fun to read compared to the rest of the novel. However, like I said, the first-third and the final-third of the book is amazing to read.

Overall, I quite enjoyed this book, and I definitely recommend giving this book a try if you have the time! You can purchase it for your eReader here.

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Misconception

Author: Christy Hayes
Published: June 20, 2011
Publisher: Self-published
244 pages (eBook) 

I received this book free of charge in exchange for a review. It’s the first time I’ve ever read a book by a self-published author and I was actually kind of excited about it. While I admit I didn’t end up exactly gushing over this book after I finished, I feel like I’ve been introduced to a new world of books and I think I might be interested in reading more self-published works in the future.

Misconception centers around the Kelly family: a wife, husband and two boys. The story kicks off quickly and we encounter the main conflict of the book quickly: Pace Kelly is pregnant despite her husband, Jason, having gotten himself a vasectomy three years ago. However, despite the evidence, Pace really didn’t cheat on Jason. Jason finds it very hard to believe Pace though, because after getting his vasectomy checked out, it’s confirmed that there’s nothing wrong and he shouldn’t be producing any babies. The relationship between Pace and Jason steadily spiral into a depressing state, with both sides having serious trust issues.

Pace and Jason’s relationship is the bread and butter of this story, and it’s their drama that kept me turning the pages (figuratively; it was an eBook so I suppose I should say scrolling the pages? Hehe). I personally think it would have been more interesting if the third person narrator was less invasive in the characters’ thoughts, because I think it would have been intriguing if the reader wasn’t sure if Pace actually cheated or not. I think the “mystery” would have been great incentive for readers to glue themselves to the pages  … or maybe that’s just me. I enjoyed reading about their drama-filled relationship for the most part, what with the accusations being thrown around, the e-mail snooping and the classic hiring of a private detective to spy on the spouse. I love, love, love drama (probably why I devour Jodi Picoult books like there’s no tomorrow) and I think Misconception pulled it off without being too unbelievable and making eyes roll.

Besides the Kellys, Pace’s parents, Colin and Tori, are also central characters in this book. Colin is a famous senator and Tori is, well, his trophy wife, I suppose you can call her. Tori was my least favourite character however. Not because of her person, but more because of her character. There was something inconsistent in her character, I felt. I think it is especially noticeable when the narrator narrates from Tori’s perspective, then switches and narrates from another character’s perspective but Tori is still in the scene. She felt like two different characters sometimes.

The plot is drama-filled and moves along at a good pace, which I liked. There is one thing about the plot that kind of threw me off a bit though. I could be wrong, but to me, Pace and Jason’s relationship is the main focus of the story. So I was a little thrown off that the climax of the story dealt primarily with Colin and Tori, while Pace and Jason just kind of made up in the background. With that said though, I did actually quite like the ending. I am a little confused as to why the focus was on Pace’s parents instead — but that may be because I misinterpreted Colin and Tori’s importance in the story. Okay, I admit it, I didn’t find them that important. But back on track, I did like the ending. I thought it was fitting and climatic and didn’t have a denouement that overstayed its welcome (which is something that really bothers me in books haha, but I’m glad I didn’t have that issue here).

There are some technical things like typos (rare) and awkward sentences, so I think Misconception could benefit from a thorough editing, but I didn’t want to be all nitty-gritty. Overall, this is an okay book. I feel a bit mixed about it, but it’s really not bad. I think if you like family drama sort of books, you should check it out (the author’s website shows the places where you can purchase it).

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